buatlah cerita pengalaman menggunakan simple past tense

last year, I and my family went ancol,we playing water and happy, we went rode car, I went with father mother and my sister,,

last weekend i went to Bali, i went with my whole family we went on friday we were doing a lot of fun things there we ate a lot of unique food there, and wr went to a lot of great places there such as, kuta beach, and we went home ay sunday

ya kira" begini lah.... :3